You’ve written something. Now you need to know if it works—and how to make it better.
Whether you’re developing a feature screenplay, polishing a pilot, or preparing a script for market, I bring real industry experience to every read. I know what producers, showrunners, and development executives are looking for—because I’ve worked alongside them.
What I Offer
From a fast, focused proofread to full developmental notes, I’ll give your script the honest, constructive feedback it needs to reach the next level. No generic coverage. No AI-generated notes. Just a working writer who has spent time in the room and knows the craft.
My Credentials
- Writers’ room experience on TV projects for Roku/Skydance, supporting showrunners as a writers’ room assistant and reader, as well as WA support on projects for CBS, Showtime, and Apple TV+
- Feature consulting on produced projects, including A Mouthful of Air (Sony Pictures International, 2021), directed by Amy Koppelman and starring Amanda Seyfried
- WGA member with original screenplays highly ranked at the Austin Film Festival and The Black List, and endorsed by Coverfly
Services
- Proofreading & polish
- Developmental notes (features and pilots)
- Market preparation and positioning
- One-on-one story consultation
Ready for a Fresh Set of Eyes?
Reach out at hb.batonentertainment[at]gmail.com with a brief description of your project —genre, format, and where you are in the process—and I’ll get back to you with availability and a quote.